Louis+Mack

__louis__ [] [] Louis, nice job on your wiki!

--Yanyan [|servay] [|web quest] [|Mack_summary_results.pdf] []EDCT 203 movie project media type="file" key="geogolgy.mp3" width="240" height="20"

[[file:Your Rubric_ Science Fair Experiment _ Experiment.pdf]]
Louis, this is a great and very educational podcast! I like the descriptions you gave of the various volcanoes. They were very detailed and will help the listener visualize what you are talking about. My only suggestion to take a look at the volume controls- in the middle of your podcast, the audio started to get softer and was a little harder to hear. Overall, you did an excellent job on this assignment! - Ainsley Kuhn

Peer Review by Marisa Ladikos: Do you think the podcast is educationally sound? Why or why not? This podcast is educationally sound and you definitely had a lot of information you provided. I agree with Ainsley that your descriptions were very detailed which helped the listener easily understand. What do you suggest to improve the educational value of the podcast? The beginning of the podcast made a strange sound and hurt my ears (haha) and it was a little hard to hear you. Overall, you did a good job on the assignment!

Peer review for Movie Maker by Marisa Ladikos
====1. What impresses you most in the movie?==== I loved the music and thought the pictures you chose were really interesting! Good job making your diversity movie! ====2. What do you suggest to make the movie more appealing?==== I suggest adding some captions to the pictures.

====1. What impresses you most in the movie? I think you did a great job describing diversity through your choice of photos. I also really liked the music that you played.==== ====2. What do you suggest to make the movie more appealing? It would have been cool to see some captions on some of the slides, but overall, this was a really nice movie! Good job! -Ainsley Kuhn====

**Content**

 * ==== Is the task clearly defined? Yes I like the idea of a storybook, even though I am not familiar with your grade level, I was excited to see what was next! ====
 * ==== Is the content/task suitable for the grade level? Yes 8th grade ====
 * ==== Is the process section clear and easy to follow?Yes and it even gives the students to explore and learn with the given websites ====
 * ==== Does it provide scaffolds to help students complete the task? Yes they can learn from each other in their groups  ====
 * ==== Is the evaluation rubric very clearly defined, transparent and logical? Yes I like how you switched it to poor, good, very good.  ====

**Visuals**

 * ==== Are the pictures/audios suitable for the grade level? Yes ====
 * ==== Are the visuals in the webquest appealing? Yes I like the layout of your web quest as well ====

**Format**
-Verity Hodgkinson **Content**- Your content is very informative and appropriate for 8th graders. I love that you showed them a link to view the periodic table, which I think would be a great way to extend their learning. I also really like the helpful reminders that you included on the incorrect answer slides. Overall, the show was very easy to follow. ‍**Visuals-** Very nice! The pictures connected well with the information you provided. I also like the general layout of the slides. The use of sound would have been a nice touch, though.‍ **Format**- Your show was saved correctly. All of your links worked for me except for the one that should have lead to the reference page. Nice job overall! -Ainsley Kuhn
 * ==== Do the links in the Webquest all work properly? Yes it was easy to navigate and everything worked! Great job you event taught me some things as well ====

**Content**

 * I am not familiar with teaching middle school level students, your presentation was great and actually taught me a few things about 8th grade teaching! The content was very detailed and you seem knowledgable in this content area. Your instructions are very clear.**

**Visuals**

 * Your pictures were appropriate with the grade level and science lesson you used. I didn't hear any sounds being used and it could have made it interactive on the correct slide! Your presentation was appealing and science-like.**

**Format**

 * It is aged correctly and your links work, however, I had trouble with the last slide clicking on your resources button from the last question but great job I enjoyed looking at your presentation!!**
 * Peer Review by: Verity Hodgkinson**

Content
I thought your content was appropriate for 8th grade. I am unfamiliar with the content but you did a good job making the information easy to comprehend.

Visuals
The background was very scientific looking and you did a great job with the buttons.

Format
Your powerpoint is saved correctly and your hyperlink buttons work correctly. I only had a difficult time finding your resource page, other than that your powerpoint looks great! Peer Review by: Marisa Ladikos

WEBQUEST REVIEW by Marisa Ladikos

**Content**

 * ====The task was stated.====
 * ====The content/task was suitable for students in the 8th grade.====
 * ====I think the process section could have been a little clearer if it was written out step by step instead of just giving links and telling them to look for information. I suppose this could be appropriate for the 8th grade level (not really sure because I'm early childhood and I have to spell out every single thing I do).====
 * ==== It provides scaffolding through the links. ====
 * ==== Yes, the evaluation rubric is very clearly defined, transparent and logical. ====

**Visuals**

 * ====I did not see any visuals or hear any sounds.====
 * ====The color theme matches nicely. Some pictures could be added to make it a little more interesting.====

**Format**

 * ====Yes, all the Webquest all work properly. Good job and great topic!====

**Content**
 * ==== Is the task clearly defined? Yes but a little more detail would have been helpful. ====
 * ==== Is the content/task suitable for the grade level? This is extremely suitable for 8th graders. ====
 * ==== Is the process section clear and easy to follow? Your process is clear enough to follow but it could have been improved by clearly definining each individual step. ====
 * ==== Does it provide scaffolds to help students complete the task? Yes. The resources are great and I like that you integrated science with language arts.  ====
 * ==== Is the evaluation rubric very clearly defined, transparent and logical? The evaluation was great. The students should not have any trouble figuring out what is expected of them.  ====

**Visuals**

 * ==== Are the pictures/audios suitable for the grade level? I would have liked to see some pictures. ====
 * ==== Are the visuals in the webquest appealing? The organization makes it nice to read through and look at. ====

**Format**

 * ==== Do the links in the Webquest all work properly? All of your links work. Nice job overall! -Ainsley Kuhn ====